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a poem about me

danger1

Paid, Laid & Made
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If in my quest to achieve my goals,
I stumble or crumble and lose my soul.
Those that knew me would easily co-sign,
There was never a life as hard as mine.
No father-no money-no chance and no guide,
I only follow my voice inside.
If it guides me wrong and I do not win,
I'll learn from my mistakes and try to achieve them again.

So, how do you like it? Any feedback is good! :happysad:
 
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Descent flow, good word usage. A bit short, but nothing wrong with that.

Not too bad. :thumbsup:
 

dustinzgirl

Banned - What an Asshat!
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Taylor_Blade said:
Descent flow, good word usage. A bit short, but nothing wrong with that.

Not too bad. :thumbsup:
Ditto that.