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At the Bottom

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I'm drowning
Sinking
Floating on the water
But I'm still sinking
Lost in what's familiar
Lost is what keeps me going
I just want
I just need
To breathe again
My body knows it
Feels it
needs it
Breathes it
I'm afloat
But why?
I'm afloat
Because my body knows no better
I'm meant to drown
I'm meant to assume greatness
I'm meant to be great
Because I float
Yet I drown
None the less.

None the less.






I know it's lame and emo, but fuck you, this is the Writer's Block. :thumbsup:
 

Slacker

Postaholic
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Thats a good poem i wish i could write like that. :thumbsup: Repped!!
 
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Interesting view, and emotion displayed. The form is also unique, in it's randomness. All and all, Nicely done.
 

dustinzgirl

Banned - What an Asshat!
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Taylor_Blade said:
Interesting view, and emotion displayed. The form is also unique, in it's randomness. All and all, Nicely done.
Ditto, and amazingly enough, it does not sound cliche at all.
 
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You guys are just saying that.

It's about drinking. :happysad:
 
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dustinzgirl said:
Yuck. You forgot the puking part, then.


I'm drowning
Sinking
Floating on the water
But I'm still sinking
Lost in what's familiar
Lost is what keeps me going
I just want
I just need
To breathe again
My body knows it
Feels it
needs it
Breathes it
I'm afloat
But why?
I'm afloat
Because my body knows no better
I'm meant to drown
I'm meant to assume greatness
I'm meant to be great
Because I float
Yet I drown
None the less,
A burn in my chest.
A rise to the top,
the burn won't stop.
This pain,
There's no fluke.
I'm gonna puke!