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Blind

dustinzgirl

Banned - What an Asshat!
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#1
I did not think you saw me
When I was blind
And hiding
I thought there was warmth
Somewhere
But I was wrong
And found only
Wrath.

I did not think there was faith
Left to carry me
Home sweet Home
I saw the last pure soul
Dying
Without remorse
Beneath the Weeping
Willows.

I did not think there was truth
Whispered in darkness
Quiet and empty
I cried when the end came
Petrified
They laughed
At the only thing left
Weeping.
 

_Kitana_

Angel of Death
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#2
NICE DG...

I really Like it....why its not a fresh cutting topic, the style was cool and clean...


NICE JOB
 

TwisT

Hooked on Rocks!
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#3
"Follow Me"

Said the blind man to the Deaf man. :nod:
 

TwisT

Hooked on Rocks!
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#7
dustinzgirl said:
Yeah I figured that, but I was trying to be nice and not sarcastic in the writing forum.
Thank you!
 

Godfather

Banned - What an Asshat!
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#8
dustinzgirl said:
I did not think you saw me
When I was blind
And hiding
I thought there was warmth
Somewhere
But I was wrong
And found only
Wrath.

I did not think there was faith
Left to carry me
Home sweet Home
I saw the last pure soul
Dying
Without remorse
Beneath the Weeping
Willows.

I did not think there was truth
Whispered in darkness
Quiet and empty
I cried when the end came
Petrified
They laughed
At the only thing left
Weeping.
Try again :thumbsdn:
 

dustinzgirl

Banned - What an Asshat!
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#9
Godfather said:
Try again :thumbsdn:
Thank you for your input. What did you not like about this? Please let me know, as I take my writing very, very seriously.