Can You Hear Me?

[Nymphchick]

i lay alone at night wondering how i got here. single mom with 2 kids.
i cry in the dark, can you hear me?
i sit alone, watching my girls grow.
hating their father for messing things up.
why couldn't he just come home?
i watch my kids crying for their dad.
why dosen't he pay attention?
they starve for his attention, but he looks away.
why can he not see what hes losing?
sometimes i drink to numb the pain,
sometimes i drink to keep sane.
i hurt so bad, the pain swallowing me whole,
in the dark of night, do you hear my screams?
i keep to myself, trying to do whats right,
though the right choice is a lonely one.
i want to throw everything down and just quit,
but who will pick things up if i do?
so in the dark of night, i lay alone.
do you hear me cry?
as the darkness swallows me alive.

 

[NaughtyGirl21]

i lay alone at night wondering how i got here. single mom with 2 kids.
i cry in the dark, can you hear me?
i sit alone, watching my girls grow.
hating their father for messing things up.
why couldn't he just come home?
i watch my kids crying for their dad.
why dosen't he pay attention?
they starve for his attention, but he looks away.
why can he not see what hes losing?
sometimes i drink to numb the pain,
sometimes i drink to keep sane.
i hurt so bad, the pain swallowing me whole,
in the dark of night, do you hear my screams?
i keep to myself, trying to do whats right,
though the right choice is a lonely one.
i want to throw everything down and just quit,
but who will pick things up if i do?
so in the dark of night, i lay alone.
do you hear me cry?
as the darkness swallows me alive.

Shouldn't this be in writers block?

 

[UberSkippy]

i lay alone at night wondering how i got here. single mom with 2 kids.
i cry in the dark, can you hear me?
i sit alone, watching my girls grow.
hating their father for messing things up.
why couldn't he just come home?
i watch my kids crying for their dad.
why dosen't he pay attention?
they starve for his attention, but he looks away.
why can he not see what hes losing?
sometimes i drink to numb the pain,
sometimes i drink to keep sane.
i hurt so bad, the pain swallowing me whole,
in the dark of night, do you hear my screams?
i keep to myself, trying to do whats right,
though the right choice is a lonely one.
i want to throw everything down and just quit,
but who will pick things up if i do?
so in the dark of night, i lay alone.
do you hear me cry?
as the darkness swallows me alive.

Damnit, now I'm all sad and stuff.

 

[Taylor_Blade]

i lay alone at night wondering how i got here. single mom with 2 kids.
i cry in the dark, can you hear me?
i sit alone, watching my girls grow.
hating their father for messing things up.
why couldn't he just come home?
i watch my kids crying for their dad.
why dosen't he pay attention?
they starve for his attention, but he looks away.
why can he not see what hes losing?
sometimes i drink to numb the pain,
sometimes i drink to keep sane.
i hurt so bad, the pain swallowing me whole,
in the dark of night, do you hear my screams?
i keep to myself, trying to do whats right,
though the right choice is a lonely one.
i want to throw everything down and just quit,
but who will pick things up if i do?
so in the dark of night, i lay alone.
do you hear me cry?
as the darkness swallows me alive.

That's a very sad little bit of writing.

good.....but...sad.

 

[Awaken]

Shouldn't this be in writers block?

It could be. But she's discussing her own life here, perhaps. That's where the best authors come from, the heart.

Nymph, nice, but saddening. Thanks "alot." As though my day didn't suck enough already...lol.

Good job.

 

[JLXC]

I don't know the situation, and I'm a newb, but if he's out of the picture... why don't you find a more suitable mate? I'm sorry for your situation, it sucks when some guys think that fatherhood stops once the sperm has been donated. I hope it improves for you.

 

[Nymphchick]

thanx boyz. sorry to all, i didn't know what this was when i started writting it. hope its ok. if someone can move it for me thanx

 

[Easty]

i like it, thought it should've been moved, but it really doesn't matter to me.

nicely written nymph, tugged my strings it did.

repped

 

[Nymphchick]

well i don't really want a mate at the moment. i just wrote it to vent a bit i guess. i'm usually a happy go lucky person, but i started writting and thats what came out. glad you all liked it though.