I have to do this project for a language class and wanted to know if what you thought and want to know if I should change anything.
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At the start of what is known as time there was the prodigy. The prodigy, was the one whom was the master, creater of the universe, and time. He created magnificent lands of rushing rivers, mountains goliath in size, and shape, along with rolling plains. He was soon to realize that what was the point of the universe with out life. Thus he decided to use the recources and elments of the universe to create the people. With out feeling, no one would be albe to realize that they exist, in a world, beyond an infinite amount of darkness. The prodigy soon realized this problem and he soon had to call upon the providence of sense. The providence of sense gave them the five senses:hear, see, feel, touch, and taste. Now that the people were to to notice that they exist, they needed knowledge to make sense of it all. Hence he called upon the creator of knowledge. He then gave the people the power to think. Now that the people were soon able to think and act for them selves, he watched for years to come, to make sure that they would survive. He protected them all he could from castastrophic events, such as plague, and weather. He did all he could but some he could not protect them from, such as war. He soon realized that it was up to them to determine the fate of themselves; and soon faded away. The people still know he exist, they know they cant see him but still know in their hearts that he's still there.
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At the start of what is known as time there was the prodigy. The prodigy, was the one whom was the master, creater of the universe, and time. He created magnificent lands of rushing rivers, mountains goliath in size, and shape, along with rolling plains. He was soon to realize that what was the point of the universe with out life. Thus he decided to use the recources and elments of the universe to create the people. With out feeling, no one would be albe to realize that they exist, in a world, beyond an infinite amount of darkness. The prodigy soon realized this problem and he soon had to call upon the providence of sense. The providence of sense gave them the five senses:hear, see, feel, touch, and taste. Now that the people were to to notice that they exist, they needed knowledge to make sense of it all. Hence he called upon the creator of knowledge. He then gave the people the power to think. Now that the people were soon able to think and act for them selves, he watched for years to come, to make sure that they would survive. He protected them all he could from castastrophic events, such as plague, and weather. He did all he could but some he could not protect them from, such as war. He soon realized that it was up to them to determine the fate of themselves; and soon faded away. The people still know he exist, they know they cant see him but still know in their hearts that he's still there.