Darkness

BlastemSkyHigh

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Darkness is ever near, it’s become everything I fear.
Grasping onto life, but my hands grabbing for a knife.
Loneliness and all my sorrow, searching for tomorrow.
Emptiness there’s nothing left, I try to take another breath.
Who will win in this war, I hope for nothing, nothing more.
 
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MisterFister

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Nice cadence and structure but I'm confused by the mixed message. You fear the darkness of death but then hope for nothing more? Maybe the last couplet is ironic? I'm not sure.
 

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My mind pre-read the first line as "Darkness imprisoning me"
 
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