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It's good but...it doesn't stick. A few lines stand out, especially in the one called "Rain" and they do tell a good story, but they just won't stick...

(P.S, I know my stuff doesnt stick either, and that my poems lack the storytelling factor. As we say here in dutchland, the best boatsmen stand on the peer.)
 

fuck_you

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Nice job! My work is all on these forums they are ehh....Rather uniqe poems i hope you enjoy!
 

Smoke

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_Kitana_ said:
Most of us write free verse/freestyle.

Nice work thanks for sharing with us.

You spelt right wrong. Its supposed to be write.
:p


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fuck_you

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smoke-it said:
You spelt right wrong. Its supposed to be write.
:p


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1st of all kit did not spell "right" she spelled write 2nd who gives a fuck? stop correcting people dumbass!
 

Smoke

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fuck_you said:
1st of all kit did not spell "right" she spelled write 2nd who gives a fuck? stop correcting people dumbass!

Your a fucking idiot, she wen't back and corrected it. Your lucky this aint B&T, kid.