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I like those girls

dustinzgirl

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I like those girls with the long, painted nails.
Their hair perfected, breasts and ass
bobbing and jiggling like ninety pound whales.
Once I had dolls with eyes of perfect glass.
When I opened their heads, a hole grinned back.
They are like a plague of Americana,
and perhaps, in truth, I am a bit jealous.

But they are not as innocent nor as promising as I.

I wait to cloak myself in night, far from the bolting
daily blame of living my controlled corporate welt.
washes away in the uncontrolled erotica
When I wake, this would have been a dream of occult.

The act itself rescues me from certain fate
Death of boredom, if you will.
The tightness against my wrists
and the pain is sweeter than the taste of
my own blood seeping in my mouth.
I am the perfection of shamelessness,
rising against him in my own filth.

Here, I am not in control.

I am just a girl lost beneath him, drowning in chaos.
Sweet and innocent, red locks and green eyes.
Little pink bows in my piggy-tails
and I stare wide eyed.

The taste of darkness penetrates deep against my soul.
Pure beauty when I can not escape the binds.
Hands thrust above my head bound in cold steel.
I cry out but taste only leather in my mouth.
Those places others would shy away,
I beg to go farther.

This is now my religion, my faith, my god.
The world does not pound at me in the night.
It does not scream to be fed my blood.

I lose who I am and become another girl,
with small, pouting lips.
And innocence swaying in her hips.
 

_Kitana_

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Well written.

I like the flow the poetry of it.

I like how you bring us to the point allowing us to taste it with ya.


thanx you.
 

Offalittle

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Well written.

Does it ever bother you to "put yourself out there?" I assume that is pretty personal and for some hard to share. I was curious if it was a decision you stuggle with.
 

The_DEAL

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Offalittle said:
Well written.

Does it ever bother you to "put yourself out there?" I assume that is pretty personal and for some hard to share. I was curious if it was a decision you stuggle with.
notice that that is what its for
i belive that when its posted it also becomes the property of wtf.com and its afilates. hmmmm... any insite on this Jason?
 

Offalittle

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youknowthedeal said:
notice that that is what its for
i belive that when its posted it also becomes the property of wtf.com and its afilates. hmmmm... any insite on this Jason?
I speak only of the decision to share such personal feelings. I write all the time, but rarely does it reveal any deep personal information. I was interested in this writters thoughts on the subject.

I be smarter enough too understood what a forum called "writters block" is intended for.
 

_Kitana_

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youknowthedeal said:
notice that that is what its for
i belive that when its posted it also becomes the property of wtf.com and its afilates. hmmmm... any insite on this Jason?

no i don't believe it becomes the property of wtf.com.
 

dustinzgirl

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first of all, thanks guys!
No it does not become property of wtf, it is technically my published material, everything you post online is your material unless you sign a release.
Also, I am not afraid to put myself out there. In my writing, I take an emotion and intensify it. I dont think this is really personal, it is more of a description of one emotion enhance, intensified and poetically stated.
 

durtytoothbrush

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it may not become the property of wtf- but, anyone who reads it and slams a copyright on it before you have one now owns it. Scary isn't it?
 

dustinzgirl

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durtytoothbrush said:
it may not become the property of wtf- but, anyone who reads it and slams a copyright on it before you have one now owns it. Scary isn't it?
Nope and not true
 

CopyLifted

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durtytoothbrush said:
it may not become the property of wtf- but, anyone who reads it and slams a copyright on it before you have one now owns it. Scary isn't it?
My understanding of anything to do with poems/songs/literature that you post on the internet of your own, is copyrighted to the poster and is considered "published".

So, no, they can't "slam" a copyright on it, because it has already been "published" on the internet and is copyrighted to that person at that moment.