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dustinzgirl

Banned - What an Asshat!
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The last sign of life
Crossed my rocky path
And flittered out of sight

I drew my arrow
Swift and narrow
And struck into the sky

I crossed the earth
Searching for my worth
But found only my sword

The last of my heart
Gave a fleeting beat
And left to the night
 

skylinec

Somewhere in the Between
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Just to be different I'm not going to put a :thumbsup: smiley. Shit, I just did. Good work.
 

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Enraged before the storm
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Pretty good. :banana: Too bad whenever i try to write i go crazy and laugh at myself hysterically :ugly:
 
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I know that

Taylor_Blade said:
It is not about rhyming, it's about the emotion and expression there of.
I was referring to her critique of Shredding the needle. She went on about how the rhyming scheme was off. It wasn't perfect, but who is?