Inaudibly Screaming

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Should I Call You Jesus?
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silence shatters moonlit beauty
like tears fighting dust
through life and death
heart and soul
it shortens every breath
awakening like dawn
and staring like wolves
piercing all elements
it grasp and contracts
my smothered friend
as i choke on my
tongue
again.
 

DIZNUTS

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countrygrl said:
That was one cool too until you got to thepoint about choking on your own tongue. :(
yea that part completly fucked it all up....
 

_Kitana_

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The ending fits well with the rest of the poem, its a sudden jolt that makes you realize what she is talking about.

Diffently GOOD....