Inaudibly Screaming

[MSUIndian]

silence shatters moonlit beauty
like tears fighting dust
through life and death
heart and soul
it shortens every breath
awakening like dawn
and staring like wolves
piercing all elements
it grasp and contracts
my smothered friend
as i choke on my
tongue
again.

 

[screwy]

I hate you. When's Junglizm gonna post here again?

 

[countrygrl]

That was one cool too until you got to thepoint about choking on your own tongue.

 

[DIZNUTS]

That was one cool too until you got to thepoint about choking on your own tongue.

yea that part completly fucked it all up....

 

[switch_scribe]

Perhaps you haven't read this yet....

http://www.wtf.com/showthread.php?t=4880

As I recall, those are the rules for the writer's block.

 

[Zoso]

Perhaps you haven't read this yet....

http://www.wtf.com/showthread.php?t=4880

As I recall, those are the rules for the writer's block.

BOOYOW!!!!!!... rep

i happen to like it. its one of my favorites....

 

[_Kitana_]

The ending fits well with the rest of the poem, its a sudden jolt that makes you realize what she is talking about.

Diffently GOOD....