Just A Lil Poem

[Ciagro]

It hurts to say I love you!
It hurts to say I care for you!
It hurts to say I cherish you!
It hurts to say I would do anything for you!
I know that the love between us has faded.
I hate to face the truth but now you are just the part of my heaven that is shaded.
I have prayed for your love and honesty.
Instead all i got was your hate and the competion.
I finally Know now that you are nothing to me.
I finally know now that you never were anything to me.
Leave the death of us forgotten.
The rememberance of your lies makes me sick to my stomach.
Because everytime i think of you i just want to puke.
O_~
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*!!@Tell me what ya think @!!!*

 

[dustinzgirl]

I think it is void of substance. Why does she/he make you want to puke? lies? ugly? violence?

I hate to face the truth but now you are just the part of my heaven that is shaded.

that line fucking rox though

 

[blah]

it's a wee bit too long though, it stands out between the repetative short lines...










the Blah is back!

 

[Havok]

it's a wee bit too long though, it stands out between the repetative short lines...










the Blah is back!

blaaaaaah!

 

[Stardust]

I like it
it has real feelings in it =)