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Just something, something.

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Kind of redundant,
Can you see?
Sick of the lies,
The hypocrisy.

What it took,
to make it through,
Was found in your love,
Found in you.

Every drop,
Keeps me sane.
My happiness is false...
I live in pain.

One more attempt,
To drown you out.
This urge will return,
There's no doubt.

I'm lost to your power.
 

tkme2thebedroom

standard people-hater
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Wow...that reminds me of someone. A couple someones actually. Seems like it was just what you were feeling at the moment. Reminds me of sonet form, although there is no iambic pentameter (thank GOD). Nice one!
 

Brazen

BAD, BOLD, BRAZEN
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#3
Thats great havok. You would be a good poet.
 
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It was really good... wow.
What were the circumstances under which you wrote it? Was it planned "writing time"? or... did it just come naturally... y'know - had that "poem writing" state of mind... needed to purge?
 
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#5
I just feel like writing something, so I do it.

Check the Writer's Block, I've a few more out there.

I'm teh 1337 p037. :happysad:
 
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I know that feeling! Lucky - i think poets need that feeling to wriote a real good poem...