Miscarriage (or : to Jeremy)

blah

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State me as you see me,
be me as I am.
Crave from me the being that I just don't understand.
Live me in the plenty,
make me be a man.
Stand with me in dreaming as in real you never can.

Let us walk the silence,
a frame by frame charade,
a tasteless touch, unspoken look
a memory of days.
 

magnolia

Postaholic
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Short, but so awsome. I love it. U should write some stuff and try to get it published sometime, or maybe just keep a poetry journal. U're good. Very good.
 

skylinec

Somewhere in the Between
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blah said:
State me as you see me,
be me as I am.
Crave from me the being that I just don't understand.
Live me in the plenty,
make me be a man.
Stand with me in dreaming as in real you never can.

Let us walk the silence,
a frame by frame charade,
a tasteless touch, unspoken look
a memory of days.
Oi?! rep for you
 

blah

Tenderony
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Thanks!
And I made it up on the spot. I stopped writing long ago. Last posts were on the hipforums a year ago.
I'll continue posting here maybe :)