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Should I Call You Jesus?
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I'm drowning
Quick, save me
I'm floundering
In my despair
I'm choking
On these tears
I'm crying
Because you're not there
I'm hacking
Up forgotten love
I'm freezing
In your empty cold
I'm screaming
Words I never knew
I'm daring
To be alone.

 

DIZNUTS

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its aight man......but you get better with practice or you can alway pop some acid and write some crazy shit.....well unless some shaved chimps weilding machete's aren't after you when you type it....
 

_Kitana_

Angel of Death
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Not one for liking this type of style but before I judge anyone poem I take a minute to read it first queitly to myself then aloud. THis is not a bad poem when read a loud.... the words are a twisting, yet flowing way and I semi like it.

This is not a style I would get use to writting in if you want to better yourself as a poet