I stumbled across this on another forum, when I was searching for "Gordon Freeman." Don't ask.
It was a story about this nine year old Paki kid who is sold into slavery to a rich family by his aunt. They abuse him, pour kerosene on his wounds, step on him with high heels, and make him his sex slave, mainly with foot fetish shit.
The violence was phenomenal, it was a great read. At one point he escapes, the Police put him into an orphanage, where the administrator makes him her personal slave, for both sex/chores.
Sounds disturbing, right? Like I said, the violence was so great, you didn't give a shit about the sexual parts (They weren't very sexual anyway).
He is then reported missing, he's taken to the police department, and they execute another slave by poking out his eyeballs by stepping on them with high heeled boots, put battery acid in his eye sockets, whip him with a whip with metal shards, and then cane him to death by paralysis.
R.I.P. At age 12. Ironically, he was a servant for a human rights worker, and she demanded he be killed this way for stealing 200 units of Paki currency
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So at the end, the main character is punished by having his fingernails removed, having pins stuck inside the nail flesh, and then having his finger bones crushed by tweezers and then amputated with an axe.
At that point, I literally vomited on my floor, and it was not caused by the "Ass Coffee" virus I've had for two days.
The voilence was awesome until the end. Then it just became disturbing.
EDIT: This is actually the best piece of Amatuer fiction I ever read besides this Zelda fanfic, but the ending killed this work of art. They still make him serve them after the fingers come off.
EDIT VER. 2: After reading it in a non-tired state, it's fucking disgusting. If you really are a sick fuck, PM me. The sexual shit is pretty blatant. Author = Sick bastard
It was a story about this nine year old Paki kid who is sold into slavery to a rich family by his aunt. They abuse him, pour kerosene on his wounds, step on him with high heels, and make him his sex slave, mainly with foot fetish shit.
The violence was phenomenal, it was a great read. At one point he escapes, the Police put him into an orphanage, where the administrator makes him her personal slave, for both sex/chores.
Sounds disturbing, right? Like I said, the violence was so great, you didn't give a shit about the sexual parts (They weren't very sexual anyway).
He is then reported missing, he's taken to the police department, and they execute another slave by poking out his eyeballs by stepping on them with high heeled boots, put battery acid in his eye sockets, whip him with a whip with metal shards, and then cane him to death by paralysis.
R.I.P. At age 12. Ironically, he was a servant for a human rights worker, and she demanded he be killed this way for stealing 200 units of Paki currency
.So at the end, the main character is punished by having his fingernails removed, having pins stuck inside the nail flesh, and then having his finger bones crushed by tweezers and then amputated with an axe.
At that point, I literally vomited on my floor, and it was not caused by the "Ass Coffee" virus I've had for two days.
The voilence was awesome until the end. Then it just became disturbing.
EDIT: This is actually the best piece of Amatuer fiction I ever read besides this Zelda fanfic, but the ending killed this work of art. They still make him serve them after the fingers come off.
EDIT VER. 2: After reading it in a non-tired state, it's fucking disgusting. If you really are a sick fuck, PM me. The sexual shit is pretty blatant. Author = Sick bastard
