Picture Of Poems

[_Kitana_]

Ok i thought this would be kind of fun. Every week we will pick a diffrent peice of artwork and chose to write a poem about. The art can be anything you want it to be and the poem can be done in any style. This will not only help to pass around some great peices of art but also help us as writers. My Idea. I go first.


Young Goddess

 

[gehtfuct]

Nice pic. Do I write,or do you?

 

[Seije]

aight..not very good at words and english..but i'll try...and then just edit it into this space
edit* yea do we write one also? edit: ok

btw i drew this fairy laying on the leaf of a rose...spent a week on it so far...it's totally lovely and just beautiful...least that's what everyone else has said to me

 

[_Kitana_]

no i post pic you guys can write about it. In as many diffrent ways as you want to.

short story poem whatever

much like what DG and I did with the Dark Angel Painting.

 

[gehtfuct]

*ques Barry White music*

Ahh...The Young Goddess,with long wind swept flowing hair. She begs me to come closer,as she gazes down to me with her fiery glare. She whispers softly commanding me to disrobe as the sweat smell of lust wafts through the air. She slowly moves her hands down releasing my manhood. Softly she speaks: "WTF!! Spongebob Underware!"

Sorry,its all I had.

 

[_Kitana_]

The Young Goddess

Beauty becomes lost to a creature
of eyes with such depth and twisted innocents
of a tortured soul, presenting forth its three tears
of love, madness and rage.
A price that was hers to pay.
Upon her do they now look
to wonder what magic has granted her such a life
a life of immortality...to be framed and still
for all to see her darken sadness, her sadistical ways
and reveal to us her secrets of unchanged youth

 

[skylinec]

The Young Goddess

Beauty becomes lost to a creature
of eyes with such depth and twisted innocents
of a tortured soul, presenting forth its three tears
of love, madness and rage.
A price that was hers to pay.
Upon her do they now look
to wonder what magic has granted her such a life
a life of immortality...to be framed and still
for all to see her darken sadness, her sadistical ways
and reveal to us her secrets of unchanged youth

i can't write shit i didn't even pass english class

good poem

 

[Seije]

The Young Goddess

Beauty becomes lost to a creature
of eyes with such depth and twisted innocents
of a tortured soul, presenting forth its three tears
of love, madness and rage.
A price that was hers to pay.
Upon her do they now look
to wonder what magic has granted her such a life
a life of immortality...to be framed and still
for all to see her darken sadness, her sadistical ways
and reveal to us her secrets of unchanged youth

wow..how'd you come up with that? it's very nice

 

[_Kitana_]

*ques Barry White music*

Ahh...The Young Goddess,with long wind swept flowing hair. She begs me to come closer,as she gazes down to me with her fiery glare. She whispers softly commanding me to disrobe as the sweat smell of lust wafts through the air. She slowly moves her hands down releasing my manhood. Softly she speaks: "WTF!! Spongebob Underware!"

Sorry,its all I had.

LOL

that was fucking awesome

 

[dustinzgirl]

gf, you are funny as shit.
Kit, nice, you are good at the visuals.

here is mine. she looks sad and wanting.


She slips, silently, through the places
Where only the unicorn goes,
To watch with eyes deep like the ocean
The man she could never have
From behind her Goddess eyes
And the children she would birth
If the forest’s key was not in her care
And the simple life she dreams of;
To wait for fate to lull her asleep.

 

[gehtfuct]

*ques James Brown music*

ah ah ah ah Geht on up..geht on up...geht on up now! Hey!!

Young Goddess...Talkin' too meh..
Look around now
aint tryin' to fool meh..OW!!
so geht on up...geht on up....geht on up now
ah ah ah ah Hey!! ow!
Gonna give it to ya..
James Brown style
goin' down town,cause I caint geht it up now...Ow!!
Geht on up...geht on up...
ah ah ah ah Ow!! Heh!


feeble attempt at humor

 

[_Kitana_]

*ques James Brown music*

ah ah ah ah Geht on up..geht on up...geht on up now! Hey!!

Young Goddess...Talkin' too meh..
Look around now
aint tryin' to fool meh..OW!!
so geht on up...geht on up....geht on up now
ah ah ah ah Hey!! ow!
Gonna give it to ya..
James Brown style
goin' down town,cause I caint geht it up now...Ow!!
Geht on up...geht on up...
ah ah ah ah Ow!! Heh!


feeble attempt at humor

wow



That poem touch me in ways you would only know

 

[dustinzgirl]

*ques James Brown music*

ah ah ah ah Geht on up..geht on up...geht on up now! Hey!!

Young Goddess...Talkin' too meh..
Look around now
aint tryin' to fool meh..OW!!
so geht on up...geht on up....geht on up now
ah ah ah ah Hey!! ow!
Gonna give it to ya..
James Brown style
goin' down town,cause I caint geht it up now...Ow!!
Geht on up...geht on up...
ah ah ah ah Ow!! Heh!


feeble attempt at humor

charming poetry in a disturbing almost poetic manner.
If you say it really low, its almost sexy......

Kit, I do like comic books, been out for a few years since IRL got a hold of me and slowly choked out the desire for futile fun.

I loved stryke, razor, lady death, morbid angel, and I have read a few dawns. I just went another way, not sure why.

 

[_Kitana_]

charming poetry in a disturbing almost poetic manner.
If you say it really low, its almost sexy......

Kit, I do like comic books, been out for a few years since IRL got a hold of me and slowly choked out the desire for futile fun.

I loved stryke, razor, lady death, morbid angel, and I have read a few dawns. I just went another way, not sure why.

Kick ass


I love dawn as you can tell hehehe




she so enchanting

 

[_Kitana_]

since i won't be here

the new art work can get pick by gf

 

[blah]

Okay so im like really late....


Young Goddess

Starstrangled eyes piercing red satin
a daunting disguise of everything lost
Kindled her life to furfil expectations
the withering heights of the things that she must

Craving a sense of divine revelation
her nature it calls her back to a way
She deems in their eyes she can't shake the passion
for all that is life, it's there she will stay

The forrest she roams to find absolution
forgiveness not given to living or dead
The wise trees now moan, bending and breaking
creating a path she forever may tread.

 

[Seije]

Okay so im like really late....


Young Goddess

Starstrangled eyes piercing red satin
a daunting disguise of everything lost
Kindled her life to furfil expectations
the withering heights of the things that she must

Craving a sense of divine revelation
her nature it calls her back to a way
She deems in their eyes she can't shake the passion
for all that is life, it's there she will stay

The forrest she roams to find absolution
forgiveness not given to living or dead
The wise trees now moan, bending and breaking
creating a path she forever may tread.

that's pretty sweet too

 

[dustinzgirl]

Okay so im like really late....


Young Goddess

Starstrangled eyes piercing red satin
a daunting disguise of everything lost
Kindled her life to furfil expectations
the withering heights of the things that she must

Craving a sense of divine revelation
her nature it calls her back to a way
She deems in their eyes she can't shake the passion
for all that is life, it's there she will stay

The forrest she roams to find absolution
forgiveness not given to living or dead
The wise trees now moan, bending and breaking
creating a path she forever may tread.

love the imagery, nice job

 

[blah]

Thanks all, but be warned! After a while I start thinking to much and stop feeling the poems I write. I'm not saying it will happen soon, but you could see a decline in quality over time. (like the rhyming problem I mentioned in the Kansas thread )