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poetry

otepsoul

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got any thing good place it hear.

Ive seen the light 1 time or anthor,but ive seen the darkness of a blade many times more, plz help me escape from the dark take my hand and set me free, free of cares and worrys. -)___)not my best but its a start.
 

_Kitana_

Angel of Death
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A single shard
Sliced across my soul,
Bleeding tiny drops of immoral thoughts
Dreams nonetheless.
Nightmares, that echo in hollow
illusion, composed of his face.
His heavenly body next to mine.
Who is this that has crept into my mind?
He is not of my lover… for he far
And I am but here….
Lost in a moment,
caught up an a delusion
of the changing pace
dwelling deep with in my heart.
As I wonder
Who name is it that I call for in my dreams?
Is it his that never responds….
Or is it a reflection of my own voice?
That is never heard…..
I know neither, yet I still dream of them….
With the haunting answer to the question
that I dare not ask, but know exist.
Bound to two am I,
and two I may not have.
 

Solanaceae

Config.Solanaceae
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_Kitana_ said:
A single shard
Sliced across my soul,
Bleeding tiny drops of immoral thoughts
Dreams nonetheless.
Nightmares, that echo in hollow
illusion, composed of his face.
His heavenly body next to mine.
Who is this that has crept into my mind?
He is not of my lover… for he far
And I am but here….
Lost in a moment,
caught up an a delusion
of the changing pace
dwelling deep with in my heart.
As I wonder
Who name is it that I call for in my dreams?
Is it his that never responds….
Or is it a reflection of my own voice?
That is never heard…..
I know neither, yet I still dream of them….
With the haunting answer to the question
that I dare not ask, but know exist.
Bound to two am I,
and two I may not have.
You know. now you are just trying to be a bullshit artist.
 

_Kitana_

Angel of Death
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Solanaceae said:
You know. now you are just trying to be a bullshit artist.
your thoughts and concerns about my poetry matter little.

also my guess is you didn't understand it
 

Hells_angel

Ruler of the underworld
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Damn. That was good kit. Mine are all on www.poetry.com Look under Kristie Nicole Perritt and Kristie Nicole Green. Yeah. I have two last names. Most of them are already being published in poetry books. If you have not already kit, you should post yours there.
 

Solanaceae

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_Kitana_ said:
your thoughts and concerns about my poetry matter little.

also my guess is you didn't understand it
Well, your guess just ahppened to be wrong. FUck, what big words did you use that I wouldn't understand? Even otepsoul would understand it. And stop with the age discrimination. Discrimination is against the rules here you know?
 

The_DEAL

FAILING @FAILING!
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Hells_angel said:
Damn. That was good kit. Mine are all on www.poetry.com Look under Kristie Nicole Perritt and Kristie Nicole Green. Yeah. I have two last names. Most of them are already being published in poetry books. If you have not already kit, you should post yours there.
my sister is haveing poems published there
 

Hells_angel

Ruler of the underworld
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Solanaceae said:
You know. now you are just trying to be a bullshit artist.
Dude. What the fuck. The trend is poetry. What else did you expect? Dipshit. That was a good poem by the way so you can't criticize. STFU.
 

otepsoul

Bringer of Bees
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Solanaceae said:
Well, your guess just ahppened to be wrong. FUck, what big words did you use that I wouldn't understand? Even otepsoul would understand it. And stop with the age discrimination. Discrimination is against the rules here you know?
omg is that all you think about.
 

Hells_angel

Ruler of the underworld
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youknowthedeal said:
my sister is haveing poems published there
Cool. I will have to check that out. What is her name? There are some really good poetry published from that website :cookie:
 

The_DEAL

FAILING @FAILING!
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Hells_angel said:
Cool. I will have to check that out. What is her name? There are some really good poetry published from that website :cookie:
Hannah Bishop
mmmm thanks :popcorn:
 

_Kitana_

Angel of Death
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Solanaceae said:
Well, your guess just ahppened to be wrong. FUck, what big words did you use that I wouldn't understand? Even otepsoul would understand it. And stop with the age discrimination. Discrimination is against the rules here you know?
poetry is not about big words, its about big emotion...feelings.... power....

Words are only a frail shadow of what a poem truly is there. Wasn't discriminating against your age... you just didn't understand it.
 

ron

Buster of Asses
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The strangler strokes his silken cord,
The mugger loves his knife,
The poisoner makes his victims twitch,
and thrash away their life,
The passionate choose bullets,
or perhaps a heavy club,
While some are more inventive,
they electrify a tub,
But the ones who give me nightmares,
and destroy my aplomb,
Are those smiling men in politics,
with their damned atomic bomb.
 

screw_you_jack

Pig Tails and a Shotgun
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Hells_angel said:
Damn. That was good kit. Mine are all on www.poetry.com Look under Kristie Nicole Perritt and Kristie Nicole Green. Yeah. I have two last names. Most of them are already being published in poetry books. If you have not already kit, you should post yours there.
I was sooo exciting when they said the'd "publish" some of my work. I think though, that site and everything bound to it is bullshit. Not to say some of the stuff sumited there is not good, i just think it's all about money, and they'll publish anything if you pay them enough
 

screw_you_jack

Pig Tails and a Shotgun
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_Kitana_ said:
A single shard
Sliced across my soul,
Bleeding tiny drops of immoral thoughts
Dreams nonetheless.
Nightmares, that echo in hollow
illusion, composed of his face.
His heavenly body next to mine.
Who is this that has crept into my mind?
He is not of my lover… for he far
And I am but here….
Lost in a moment,
caught up an a delusion
of the changing pace
dwelling deep with in my heart.
As I wonder
Who name is it that I call for in my dreams?
Is it his that never responds….
Or is it a reflection of my own voice?
That is never heard…..
I know neither, yet I still dream of them….
With the haunting answer to the question
that I dare not ask, but know exist.
Bound to two am I,
and two I may not have.
Kat.... that was very emotional... the last two lines.... very much enjoyed
 

_Kitana_

Angel of Death
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ron said:
The strangler strokes his silken cord,
The mugger loves his knife,
The poisoner makes his victims twitch,
and thrash away their life,
The passionate choose bullets,
or perhaps a heavy club,
While some are more inventive,
they electrify a tub,
But the ones who give me nightmares,
and destroy my aplomb,
Are those smiling men in politics,
with their damned atomic bomb.
Nice ron, very well wrote... Did you write it?

I believe I have read a poem similar to this one...
 

ron

Buster of Asses
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_Kitana_ said:
Nice ron, very well wrote... Did you write it?

I believe I have read a poem similar to this one...
Written...It's called Rogues Gallery. I think I wrote it in 8th grade. I published it a long time ago.