Quick Question/My Songs Thread

[Captain 151]

I've noticed most of the things people write here are poems... are songs a legitimate submission as well? If so, I've got a few songs ive written off the top of my head that I could share with you.

If this is cool, then I'll just use this thread to post em. Hence, the double title.

 

[BrIONwoshMunky]

By all means!

 

[_Kitana_]

yes

go ahead and write songs, poems, stories...

 

[Captain 151]

Here's a song I wrote about a couple of months ago. probably not as good as what you guys are used to reading on here, but eh.. go easy on me.



My Religion and Me

My religion and me
Keep each other warm
I throw my hands up to the sky
And ask Jesus to take form
People try to tell me
That I've gone insane
I tell them to go fuck themselves
They never cared to venture inside my brain

My religion and me
Both voted for the man
Republican on issuesNazi like his plan
People try to tell me
that I've gone insane
I tell them to go fuck themselves
And leave my head, get out my brain

CHORUS

Fuck this, I don't need your polytheism
One god is good for me
I'll shove my beliefs down your throat and soon you will see
One god is good for you too.
Sunday mornings are ruled by the parish now
Fight them and you'll see
The wrath of God will exact his revenge on you

My religion and me
Know what is the truth
Don't ask me to explain it,
Cuz I ain't got no proof
I do what I am told and
It gets me through the day
You all can just go fuck yourselves
And leave my head, get out of my brain

My religion and me
Fight for what is right
Go against what God says
He'll smote you just for spite
Don't listen to the media
Or any atheists
All of them can fuck themselves
And leave my head, get out of my brain

CHORUS

BRIDGE

Don't drink or smoke
Don't snort or toke
Don't sleep or drive
JUST PRAY TO STAY ALIVE
Don't fight or cry
I'll tell you why
Work nine to five and
PRAY TO STAY ALIVE
PRAY TO STAY ALIVE
PRAY TO STAY ALIVE

CHORUS

 

[blah]

contradictions...

 

[otepsoul]

I've noticed most of the things people write here are poems... are songs a legitimate submission as well? If so, I've got a few songs ive written off the top of my head that I could share with you.

If this is cool, then I'll just use this thread to post em. Hence, the double title.

you can post them here. i dont mind

 

[MsPunK]

My Religion and Me

i think that song would be more powerful if it had no swear words in it. theres something about swear words that draw your attention away from the song words. i like it tho

 

[Captain 151]

i was raised with swear words.

"get your fucking feet off the table"

you know? so, i guess its just part of my mainstream vocabulary now.

 

[damknowitall]

i think that song would be more powerful if it had no swear words in it. theres something about swear words that draw your attention away from the song words. i like it tho

i agree. cusswords tke away from the powerfull effect of song. unless used properly. however i understand, i have been raised around cussing as well. good job!

 

[gettoyo50]

i think that song would be more powerful if it had no swear words in it. theres something about swear words that draw your attention away from the song words. i like it tho

i disagree, swear words arent all that bad, its just a word, and adjective, something used to describe something else. so fuck, swear as much as u possibly fuckin can....bitch

 

[Captain 151]

Armageddon

It only took me thirty minutes to write this shitty song
You stabbed me in the back
You scoped me out for just a little while, planning your attack.
And now we stand here face to face in the middle of the train station
You stabbed me in the back
You brought with you a long iron rod, and gave a little whack.

Sweet jealousy.. (Sweet jealousy)
My only friend..
Sweet jealousy..

CHROUS
Armageddon!
Armageddon!
The dam is broken now and all the water floods into my head
Armageddon!
Armageddon!
The dam is broken and I can't stop thinking how I wish you were dead

I'll throw the towel in the ring now because I give up
You stabbed me in the back
Short circuiting my every move till you get the chance to hack
Well now I'm hanging up the phone in the kitchen cuz I dont give a shit
You stabbed me in the back
Ridden more then the village bicycle, and thats a fact.

Sweet jealousy.. (Sweet jealousy)
You are my only friend..
Sweet jealousy..

CHORUS x 2