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POInPR!

Dain Bramaged
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Aight... I just finished reading DG's latest poem... And I felt like putting one up myself... Thanks DG!
 

POInPR!

Dain Bramaged
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I close my eyes and see...
Chaos...Order
Dragon's wings...Angelic feathers

A multitude of voices assault my ears...
You're one of us...not one of us...

Confusion begets frustration...

Where do I belong?
Nowhere...Everywhere...

Who do I serve?
The One...The Many...

What am I supposed to do?
Live...Die...

I don't understand!
Keep trying...Give up...

How do I know?
You don't...Look within...

When am I supposed to do what I have to?
Right know...You will know...

Visions of bodies assault my mind's eye...
Angels dying...Demons reborn...
A bleeding virgin...A baby's wail...

Crosses line the ground in glorious deception,
As people war with others for God's benediction.
Hypocrites preaching faith to the twisted masses,
Swearing by their bilbles as they fall on their asses.

Then I wake up and open my eyes and wonder,
'til I look around, close them for a final time,
And pray to die in my sleep.
 

dustinzgirl

Banned - What an Asshat!
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I so love the duality of thought in poetry, the utter randomness tied together by images.....I really liked this!

Crosses line the ground in glorious deception,
As people war with others for God's benediction.
Hypocrites preaching faith to the twisted masses,
Swearing by their bilbles as they fall on their asses.


That almost last part is awesome. I would have stopped there, because the next one:

Then I wake up and open my eyes and wonder,
'til I look around, close them for a final time,
And pray to die in my sleep.

Kind of takes away from everything above, it just doesnt quite fit...if that makes any sense.