A family decided to go to their secluded cabin in the forests of California in July of 1996. The mother's name was Maria, the father's Chris. The daughter's name was Jill. "We're going to have a great time here aren't we Jill?"Asked Maria. "We sure are Mommy!"Jane joyfully answered. The cabin was twenty miles away from any civilization. "We better get in before it rains,"said Chris. Earlier that day the channel five meteroligist predicted heavy rain fall in that area. As they approached the door there was a rustling in the bushes to their right. "Daddy what's that?" Chris realized the girl was frightened. "I'll check it out,"Chris responded. "Be carefull out there honey." "It's nothing to worry about just a dog!"Chris told them. "Well let's just get inside,"Said Maria. "Alright hold on." Chris fished the key out of his pocket. "Here it is." As they were unpacking Jill saw that dog outside waiting in the bushes. Jill decided against telling her parents for Chris was known to lose his temper, and he had been annoyed by the rain. "Can we listen to The Doors honey?"Asked Maria. "Yes, but I left it in the car Jill could you go get the CD for Daddy?" "Sure Daddy!"exclaimed Jill. "Well you better bring this flashlight it's dark out there,"Said Maria. "Okay." As Jill went to the car she could see her parents watchng the T.V. Jill didn't hear the dog coming but she felt it bite her leg and bring her crashing to the gravel driveway. Jill tried to scream but she couldn't all she could do was let out little gasps of air. As the dog dragged her into the forest she thought of everything she would miss and statred kicking the dog.
Her kicks only angered the dog. Jill felt the dog let go, she thought she was safe. In the distance she could hear "The End" playing on her parent's stereo. "Why won't they help me?" She thought. As the dog let go of her leg she rolled over so her back was on the dirt below. Jill's face was a bloody mess because it was draggd across the gravel. She felt the dog's teeth sink into her neck. She also felt the warm blood gush down her neck as the dog bit. At that moment Jill knew what the song "The End" was about. Then she thought no more.
"Go see where Jill is I'm worried."Said Maria. "Alright."Said Chris. When Chris shut the door behind him terror struck him. He could see the bloody trail left by Jill's ripped and cut open face. He could also hear the smacking and slurping noises the dog made while it ate his dear daughter. "Oh my god."Chris muttered. He went towards the bloody path and stopped he realized the dog wasn't the only threat to him and his family. A man in a dark coat was holding an axe. Chris tried to move but he was frozen in place by terror. As the man approached he lifted the axe. Chris could hear Jim Morrison singing "The End". As Chris opened his mouth to scream the axe made it's way to his skull. Blood splattered every where. "That's for taking my wife you son of a bitch."Said the man in the dark coat. "I see your daughter met my dog you mother fucker."He said to Chris' dead body.
Maria was reading a book when she heard the door open. "Chris you're back did you find Jill?" As Maria turned around she knew who was in her house. "Floyd what are you doing?" She stopped when she saw the bloody axe. With the door open she could hear the dog feasting upon her daughter. "I've come for you Maria." "You bastard you killed my family!" "I did not kill your daughter my dog did that." Floyd laughed an insane, murderous laugh. "I will be your avenging angel Maria. You shall pay." As he lifted the axe she wished she hadn't made Chris dispose of all his guns. With one swift slice Maria's legs were detached. She screamed, he laughed. "What a shame I always thought you had good legs. Oh well time to die honey." He then thrust the axe between her breasts. Maria thought of her family then she thought no more.
Her kicks only angered the dog. Jill felt the dog let go, she thought she was safe. In the distance she could hear "The End" playing on her parent's stereo. "Why won't they help me?" She thought. As the dog let go of her leg she rolled over so her back was on the dirt below. Jill's face was a bloody mess because it was draggd across the gravel. She felt the dog's teeth sink into her neck. She also felt the warm blood gush down her neck as the dog bit. At that moment Jill knew what the song "The End" was about. Then she thought no more.
"Go see where Jill is I'm worried."Said Maria. "Alright."Said Chris. When Chris shut the door behind him terror struck him. He could see the bloody trail left by Jill's ripped and cut open face. He could also hear the smacking and slurping noises the dog made while it ate his dear daughter. "Oh my god."Chris muttered. He went towards the bloody path and stopped he realized the dog wasn't the only threat to him and his family. A man in a dark coat was holding an axe. Chris tried to move but he was frozen in place by terror. As the man approached he lifted the axe. Chris could hear Jim Morrison singing "The End". As Chris opened his mouth to scream the axe made it's way to his skull. Blood splattered every where. "That's for taking my wife you son of a bitch."Said the man in the dark coat. "I see your daughter met my dog you mother fucker."He said to Chris' dead body.
Maria was reading a book when she heard the door open. "Chris you're back did you find Jill?" As Maria turned around she knew who was in her house. "Floyd what are you doing?" She stopped when she saw the bloody axe. With the door open she could hear the dog feasting upon her daughter. "I've come for you Maria." "You bastard you killed my family!" "I did not kill your daughter my dog did that." Floyd laughed an insane, murderous laugh. "I will be your avenging angel Maria. You shall pay." As he lifted the axe she wished she hadn't made Chris dispose of all his guns. With one swift slice Maria's legs were detached. She screamed, he laughed. "What a shame I always thought you had good legs. Oh well time to die honey." He then thrust the axe between her breasts. Maria thought of her family then she thought no more.
Did you like it? I was going to work a lttle more on Floyd but it's a short story so what the hell. Sorry about the Jill/Jane thing. The daughter was supposed to be a 5 year old that's very smart.
