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The Escape

gehtfuct

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The rain falls over my eyes on a sunblinding day.
It happens some times in my life, and there is no escape.
Shadows form before my eyes, demons are infront of my face.
Angels soon hover over my head, then they push me away.
Am I alive or am I dead?
Can you show me the way?

If I'm going nowhere, then that must be my fate.
This night is surely becoming one of those days.
You think I'm going crazy ...... so let's pick up the pace.

There's a light seen by blind eyes, but there's something in the way.
Fearful things are here from my life,and they're coming my way.
Then grapling hands appear before my eyes, I just stare into space.
A tear starts to fall from eye, a pounding hand crosses my face.
Then evil thoughts fill my head, it begins to overpower my brain.
Am I alive or am I dead? Reality starts to drain.

If I'm going nowhere ..... let's pick up the pace.
I don't want to relive one of those days.

Clouds form over my head, then it begins to rain.
I open my eyes, I see my bed.
Am I asleep or awake?
Am I alive or dead?
Can you show me away?


From innocent births, under darkened skies. To death's cold embrace ... perverted truth will lie. There's no escape.
 

dustinzgirl

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This is very interesting. Makes you feel lost and despairing when you read it, but in a good poetic way. I liked it!
 

gehtfuct

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It was written during some dark times.BTW,i dont think this way.
I just thought it sounded kinda cool. :thumbsup:
 

dustinzgirl

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this is the best:
"Can you show me away?"
at the ending, like you dont want anyone to show you the way, but to take you away.

everyone thinks like that sometimes, even me and i am perfect, so its pretty normal.
 

Jason

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Real cool, yeah I've felt like that too..

Nice job, dg!