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The Indiglo Kid

Captain 151

Seeped in a dry Merlot
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Wrote this song over the summer in Oxford.

I am on top of the world
No one can knock me off my pedestal
I'm singing loud and out of key
I throw my hands up at my destiny

I am on fire, I rule the sea
The greatest happiness is now known to me
And now its dark, but I am the light
Follow me and you'll be saved

Because I am the Indiglo Kid
Transparant and vacant
I'll never let this be the end
There's always another place to go
On or off, this indiglo
Casts my shadow


I am confused and out of touch
I used to rule this place I loved so much
But now its gone, flown home to you
And i'm left sitting in my grave

Because I am the Indiglo Kid
Transparant and vacant
I'll never let this be the end
There's always another place to go
On or off, this indiglo
Casts my shadow

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The flow is good, and it's followed nicely by decent structure. The emotional element is so-so, but it’s evened out by the consistency in tone. Word choice is good, could be improved, but does create a good overall mood. The point is fairly obvious, and comes across good. Though, I will say it's hard to give good feedback on lyrics, not know what type of music it goes with. That being said: Overall I liked it, but could've like it more, if that makes sense.
 

Captain 151

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Style is '80s era punk. Not indended to be emo by an means, a straight up

---C--------F
I am the Indiglo Kid
---D/G----------D/Amin (havent figured it out yet)
Transparant and vacant
---D/Amin----------G
I'll never let this be the end
---C--------------F
There's always another place to go
---G---------------
On or off this Indiglo
---F-------C
Casts my Shadow