Three Fingers

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gehtfuct

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When the light starts to dim,
My skin begins to crawl.
The fear is closing in,
I see demons on the wall.
my sanity-leave it alone

Like a child left wandering,
I have to walk but I crawl.
On a cliff is where I hang,
Three fingers till I fall.
still they follow me-leave me alone

It's an uneasy feeling, when my mind starts to roam.
I can hear my heart beating, and i'm chilled to the bone.
will they let me be-will they leave me alone

Is it all in my head?
Am I really gonna fall?
Is the heart lifeless and dead?
Have I simply lost it all?
my sanity-leave it alone

So, im left wondering.
Is it angels that call?
On the edge is where I hang.
Three fingers till I fall.
still they follow me-just leave me alone
 
dustinzgirl

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Good Job! And you know HOW hard it is to get me to say something nice! I like it!

Now, how come you didnt comment on any of my poems poop head?

Seriously though, this is the best Ive read of yours...its dark and honest.
 
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YUCK FOU!!!

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WOW is all i can say, i havnt seen this side of you. soooooooooooo did ya actually write that or did ya copy and paste it lol jj good work
 
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Good. REally Really good. I like the way it flowed. Not sure if you have posted here before, but i really, really like this..... haha, though like BA said, the title give me the worng idea.
 
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If you haven't gotten the fact that it's good yet, well, here's another one saying so. Very well written. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
 
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