Three Fingers

[gehtfuct]

When the light starts to dim,
My skin begins to crawl.
The fear is closing in,
I see demons on the wall.
my sanity-leave it alone

Like a child left wandering,
I have to walk but I crawl.
On a cliff is where I hang,
Three fingers till I fall.
still they follow me-leave me alone

It's an uneasy feeling, when my mind starts to roam.
I can hear my heart beating, and i'm chilled to the bone.
will they let me be-will they leave me alone

Is it all in my head?
Am I really gonna fall?
Is the heart lifeless and dead?
Have I simply lost it all?
my sanity-leave it alone

So, im left wondering.
Is it angels that call?
On the edge is where I hang.
Three fingers till I fall.
still they follow me-just leave me alone

 

[The_DEAL]

** claps in surprize***

 

[Jason]

Good job man. Three thumbs up.

 

[badassmtbiker]

I thought this was gonna be about female masturbation.

 

[gehtfuct]

I thought this was gonna be about female masturbation.

It's in there...wait,I think I left that out...

 

[badassmtbiker]

It's in there...wait,I think I left that out...

hehe

seriously, tho - nice work.

 

[dustinzgirl]

Good Job! And you know HOW hard it is to get me to say something nice! I like it!

Now, how come you didnt comment on any of my poems poop head?

Seriously though, this is the best Ive read of yours...its dark and honest.

 

[YUCK FOU!!!]

WOW is all i can say, i havnt seen this side of you. soooooooooooo did ya actually write that or did ya copy and paste it lol jj good work

 

[screw_you_jack]

Good. REally Really good. I like the way it flowed. Not sure if you have posted here before, but i really, really like this..... haha, though like BA said, the title give me the worng idea.

 

[magnolia]

proof that u aren't just a dumbshit. Awesome writing. I'm completely green with jelousy.

 

[teh anarchist]

deep .. very deep

 

[Snoopy]

kool

awesome

 

[FireAngel]

If you haven't gotten the fact that it's good yet, well, here's another one saying so. Very well written.

 

[DIZNUTS]

deep like a fat prostitutes vagina