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What I Sometimes Feel

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Sometimes i want to disappear
Go someplace where no one i know is near.
no friends, no family
I want to forget about the things that plague me
They're constant reminders of how things shouldn't be.
no problems, no worries
I wish there was something more to live for
So far life hasn't been worth the bore.
no love, no good memories
Anything I say or do has no influence on anyone or anything.
The only time I feel alive is when I'm dreaming



I don't know if it's a work in progress or if I should leave it as is. Anyway, thoughts?
 

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#2
pretty good, try to expand some more. the title leaves a lot to be expected, you covered only a couple things. good for the first draft though :thumbsup:
 

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Eastside said:
pretty good, try to expand some more. the title leaves a lot to be expected, you covered only a couple things. good for the first draft though :thumbsup:
yup what ^ said